Beating
Thumping
Running
Since the beginning of Life
Not ever wanting to stop
But stop it did
Just for HALF a beat
And that was the sweetest of all
When that smile was seen
Not only my Heart
But also my whole life
Stopped a bit
And it’s permanently imprinted
In my memories
The sweetest of All
Most beautiful of All
Wishing I could
Have more of such
Memories to preserve in my
Beating
Thumping
Running
Organ which has learned
To forget it’s priority job
When the most beautiful Gal
Is in my memories or in front of me !!
oh it felt soo romantic….reminds me how i felt when i saw my crush for the 1st time and fell in love at first sight β€
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Wow glad that I could resurface the best feeling in this world π Thank you so much Sulagno ( I hope that’s your name and I can call you that) π
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yup no probs…..thats my real name dude
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Ok great !! Have a great Sunday ahead π
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by the way you can check my post named An Unprecedented Tale. Its a simple fiction story referring about her. I hope you will love it a lot β€ π
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I love fiction !! Ok will surely check it out as this is what weekends are for π reading blogs and books and other loved extra curricular activities π
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Thank you in advance my friend π i am loving you blog β€
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Wow I m so happy that you’re finding this space loving π you write so very often but its good that you are regularly present π always welcome π
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Aww!this is a very lovely poem…if only their was a guy out there who would write such stuff for me..lol…anyway..great work!!
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Thank you again Nidhi π I know it won’t matter much but I can dedicate this song to you π I didn’t had any particular gal in mind while writing π but nonetheless you deserve every song because all souls are beautiful π
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Aww..thatis really sweet Darshith but i suggest you save this from ur future sweetheart and not waste it on me lol..π
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Ok as you say but I know I m gonna write a whole lot of poems for my future sweetheart π but still it won’t be a waste if its dedicated to you π
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I m sure u will..u have the talent for it..but this poem is deserved by HER as well…all the best and make sure you posr the poems u write for HER as well
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Oh yeah I surely will π May be SHE will come to know that the world knows abut HER presence before even she came to my life π Now that’s something π Thank you for your support Nidhi π
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Yeah..that’ll be really great…she is already special….ur welcomeπ
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Yes thank you so much Nidhi π Good day π
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Same to you!
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Beautiful… Loved it !!
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Thank you Saloni π
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This poem is the sweetest and most beautiful of all the poems outthere. Every line was just beautiful. I loved every word and this line jut gives me chills ” Not only my heart but also my whole life stopped a bit” this is really the sweetest thing ever. I’ve skipped half a beat reading π 3) and you’re lucky darshith you can write so beautifully π
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Yes when you have the most beautiful person in ur life ur heart skips beats at irregular intervals π and you always wish that irregularities of skipping beats should be more frequent π Thank you Salwa for the best ever compliments π Nothing today can make my Tuesday better( not even a call from Matthew Perry π ) You make me happy gal π
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Wow darshith not even a call from Mathew perry, I am so honored. Well, your comments too are the best out there and they truly make me happy and your posts too make me happy π π
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Thank you so much Salwa π Chandler Bing resides in me (or that’s how I want to believe π ) Your posts are also soothing and I get to learn things from a different perspective π Keep rocking π
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I love chandler and I love friends too it’s one of my 3 favorite shows and thank you so much your words mean a lot to me and keeps me going π π
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Favorite 3 series? What are the other 2 ? Yes Friends is the best π yes keep on writing & spreading positive frequency π
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I am currently watching gossip girl for the third time, I am seriously in love with that show. I love everything about it, I love all the characters and actually Blair Waldorf is my role model and ever since I watched it newyork became my favorite city. I can go on all day about it, I just love it so much. I also really love the vampire diares, it’s so good. What about you ?? π
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I had to google to see who was Blair Waldorf and she’s great looking π yeah I have heard of Gossip Girl but never had the chance to watch. Will do it soon enuf π my elder sis is a big fan of Vampire diaries. Me, on the other hand don’t like vampires or ghostly movies π I loved DEXTER & also ARRESTED DEVELOPMENT π it always makes me wonder how powerfully we feel for the characters that they change our thoughts and way of living in both good & bad ways π
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Yeah she is so pretty and as you said it amazes me how powerfully we feel for the characters like seriously if they are in love I feel like I am in love, if they are sad I get so sad and today Blair was getting married and she looked so beautiful I started crying that’s so weird, I don’t know how I connect so much with the characters and it also amazes me how much they inspire me what I love about Blair is that she inspires me she is actually a self centered person who schemes, manipulate people and lie in order to get what she wants and I learned that from her to always do anything it takes to get what I want but I like to do it in a better way but still the aim is the same but she is got some really nice qualities, I love her so much and I advice you to watch the show it’s amazing. I heard about dexter before but never watched it but I never heard about arrested development but I googled it and it looks fun, I will try to watch it in the near future π π
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Yes sure Gossip girl will be the next series station stop then π need patience to watch series now a days π yeah we try to imitate our favorite characters and wow its good you feel SO much connected that you cried π emotional gal π we all are selfish with varying level of selfishness π
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Well when you do tell me what you think of it and what’s the harm in being a little emotional π I’ve known these people for 5 years now, they are like family + no one is around so I can cry all I want and I am sure you cry for your favorite characters too and don’t try to deny it :p
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No not denying anything π and yeah crying is good sometimes π at least to clean off ur eyes π and no harm in being emotional because these emotions are what separates us from the non living things like rocks π and.. Why is no one around when you are crying?? You should hire a stand up comedian to bore you always and not give you time to cry π he can make ur cheek muscles ache π
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Hahhaha I don’t know if I can handle that + I love being alone, it gives me time to think,work and love myself even more than i already do because one thing I learned you are all you’ve got so I plan to love my self as much as I can and because if I don’t love my self who will?? π There is nothing better than watching gossip girl while eating candy and all This from my favorite place in the world my BED but I am not really an introvert I still enjoy spending time with my friends and I like going out, what ? about you? what do you like
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Woah great !! Yes what you said about loving yourself is true π being alone is a blessing because you get to spend time with an awesome human being ie YOU π Same here after work, I spend most of the time on bed/sofa π you can eat all the candies and them all but your love for Gossip girl won’t be less I guess π I like reading books, football, being here in WP, going out of course but with people I love spending time with π
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Yes, spending time alone is the best thing I don’t need to worry about anything and I love reading too π
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You read books? I respect you more π Which book are you reading at present ? π Yes alone time is the blessed time we can have π
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I was reading Eleanor and park but I got bored an now I am reading unshatter me but still at the very beginning, I also really like self development books, my first book was a self development book and for about 4 years they were the only kind of books I read but now I really enjoy novels too, what about you ??
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Novels are the best for me π self development books? Then you should be a renowned motivator I guess π therapist? I love playing that role and play it quite well π I love fiction books and recently reading A STORM OF SWORDS ( Game of thrones series part3)
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I love motivating people and acting like a therapist for people but I want to become a physiotherapist. I never read fiction before but I don’t think I would like it at all I actually already don’t like I don’t know why π π but third book you must be a book worm
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Yes same here I also love motivating people and helping them in any way possible π yes fiction is a genre not all like & those who like never wish to come out of the fictional world π yes 3rd book and yeah used to read a LOT before hand but not nowadays π¦ time nahi milta.. You should only read those books with which you can connect π how’s ur health though?
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Yeah helping peolple is the best thing as thank us for asking, I will be fine hopefully π π
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Yo help anyone and everyone as much as you can π so you have been to almost every part of Egypt? π
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No not every part but I’ve been to about 7 parts but there are way more places but I plan on visiting more in the future π what about you ?
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What about me what? π I have never been to Egypt π¦ but yes can visit it once I get sometime and some planning and I hope you can be a guide and a friend to accompany throughout the tour to Egypt π I m not much adventurous but you won’t b bored ever with me π
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I meant in india have you been to lots of places there and yeah sure of course i would love to accompany you and be your guide and unlike you i am very adventurous, so we will have so much fun and i doubt i will ever got bored with you darsith π π
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Oh that’s sweet of you π but I m good with talking so that will be something good and nope I haven’t been to so many places here as I like to spend time alone on bed with laptop or books mostly. But have been to some places and enjoyed π yes you can add the adventurous guide ingredient to our trip and I can add the silent tourist ingredient π that will be fun π what all adventures have you done? Or do frequently? π
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I like both adventure and alone time, I would do anything for the sake of the adventure but I haven’t done that many adventures things but I did a decent amount but mainly why i didn’t because i am still young and the people around me are so boring either my friends and family like a month ago I wanted to jump from a helicpter and my parents didn’t allow me why??? But I am gonna do it when I get older π
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What? Helicopter? You aim to be a stuntsman or something? π even with precautions and all those things are dangerous I guess and one should avoid it as long as possible π but if you want to go ahead and have fun then you should π with age you will get wiser and gain experience and hopefully your parents will not stop you rather trust ur decision π
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Despite what everyone thing I think I am very wise, I just like I have fun and have a different Prespective in everything hopefully in the future I will π π
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Oh its good !! If you’re wise then no problem at all π yup having fun is the best way to make yourself like life and live peacefully the post-fun moments π Yeah you will be more wise of course π and if not tell me and I can put some wisdom in you π
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Well from your words and your blog I feel like you’re a wise, relaxed person who loves nature and all the little things life has to offer and you believe in communicating with others, that people are good at heart, being there for others, love and beauty. That’s what I feel am I wrong?? π
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You are pretty good at recognizing a person π am I so easily decodable? π loves nature yes a tad less but all in all BINGO π you can tell something about yourself also π may be after ur exams π
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Hahaha thank you and no you are not, I am just a creep and I pay a lot if attention to people what they do, say and in your case write but not Iin a bad way I swear bit to judge or anything just to understand them and know how to communicate with them + I have to pay attention to people than all the attention time myself π and Ofcourse I would tell you but why don’t you try and guess first, come in give it a shot π π
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Now that’s something which gives me nerves π guessing π okay you have said it far more than I knew π so Thank you π You are also a cool person who mostly dont care what others think about her π You like to watch same repeatative series means you love to feel how a person makes you feel. irrespective of how bad/good/awesome they made you feel, you would feel that always if you like that person. And as you said, you give attention to what and how a person acts & reacts to situation is indeed a skill to have & hone with passing days π you like music means you have things buried in you. Now, whether you like lyrics of a song, or the beats or the tune depends on what is buried inside π And I know I was not at all near to your characterization:P
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and I feel like we got so off topic last thing I remember this was a poem about love and all I know now is that we are taking about our favorite shows, hahaha how did that happen ?
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Oh yes π it’s good to talk on similar interest topics π which poem did you mention? See I don’t even remember what it was π good ol days π
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I liked it.. Very well done.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
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Hello Naima, It’s been soo long that I am reading your comment π Happy & satisfied now π How are you? Thank you for liking it π
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I am fine, thank you for asking. How have you been.
I wish you a great weak ahead.
Warm Regards,
-Naima
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Yes I m also good Naima π same old days and life running out from the hand just as sand when we try too hard to hold it & control it π you too have a great week ahead π
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Oh yeah, I absolutely know what you are talking about. Life is something that can never be tamed.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
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Yes it can’t be tamed and it’s always good to have a rough patch so that we realize the importance of positive things in life π Keep getting stronger π
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Loved it! When asked “Would you do it again?”, the answer “In a heartbeat” takes on a whole new poignancy. Great writing. π
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Thank you so much Colin π Yes “In a Hearbeat” is always the answer π Very happy by your praise π
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