Anger
Pain
Irritation
Jealousy
We all agree is bad, right?
Still, we as humans
Fall prey to it
And it’s okay
But, what we have to ensure is
We gotta overcome
Those shaky moments
Make them our past
As soon as possible
And it takes time
Sincere effort
Not to fall for it again
While on the path of recovery
It’s just like an injury
It takes just a moment
To be injured
Or fall prey to
The negative things of life
But then it takes
Time for healing
The path of recovery is long
But traversing on the path
We learn patience
Composure
Tolerance
Suffering
And it makes our character
Not falling prey for any is the best
But, if ever you fall also
Make sure you rise
Like a phoenix from ashes
Make sure you come out
With flying colors
Make sure you become a beautiful colorful butterfly
When you leave your cocoon
Make sure you have
THAT SMILE OF MATURTIY ON YOUR LIPS…
Wonderful! Lovely poem!
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Thank you Sir π
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You’re welcome! π
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A butterfly is formed after being in cocoon for some time. It experiences restrictions to be free later on. In life we have to go through bad to be good. Nice message !!
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Yes Saloni π You for sure got the perfect message π Hope you always be free and happy like a butterfly.
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Well i wish i could be free. Honestly this is the cocoon period of my life π¦
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Yes Saloni, the cocoon stage is frustrating and bad π¦ I know you will see the sunlight soon and fly also π But, whenever and if ever you want to talk, you can mail me darsh0000@gmail.com
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Sure !! Its on us how we take it ! Thanks for being supportive
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Yes π Anytime π
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Last 4 lines make this pitch perfect!! The lesson this poem gives is beautiful!! Speechless!! π
Keep it up bro!! π
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Thank you so much Vishakha π It means a lot and happy that your reader is working fine π
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Way too fine!! π your wlecome!! π
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Wonderful words! A great poem.
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Thank you brother( I hope you don’t mind this π ) π
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Of course I don’t mind! You are my brother. It is an honor to be part of the same neighborhood with you. Peace brother Darshith!
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Yes brother, same neighborhood π
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Very inspirational poetry! The metaphor is amazing and so is the title π
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Thank you so much Kritika for your inspirational comment π I love metamorphosis and just thought of giving it words π
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Very well done π
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It means a lot π
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I loved the title! !!
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Bas? Baki !!
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Baki was good was always! ! Difficult to fathom π π
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Oh ok π Thank you Gurl π
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The message of this poem of yours is impeccable! (and I can surely relate to it..)
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Thanks so much Nicole π Yes, I felt this simple thing today and thought of sharing π
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Thank you for sharing it π
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You’re always welcome Nicole π
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