Where My Money Went

So beautiful ๐Ÿ™‚

No Talent For Certainty

For more years than Iโ€™d like to tell
I threw coins in each wishing well
I happened on; eโ€™er with the view
Of wishing I could be with you

In dreams, I had you at my side,
And left a fortune scattered wide,
To feed the hope Iโ€™d one day see
That you could love someone
Like me

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4 thoughts on “Where My Money Went

    • Great to know your thoughts ๐Ÿ™‚ But a writer should be someone who makes the wiring of the brain of the reader short and keeps him thinking about the poem for some hours ๐Ÿ˜‰ hopefully I can also come up with such a thought ๐Ÿ˜›

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      • “But a writer should be someone who makes the wiring of the brain of the reader short and keeps him thinking about the poem for some hours”

        Saying what the writer should be is rather presumptuous and any such ideas merely start limiting creativity. There should surely be a place for both simple expressions of life, as well as the more thought provoking and complex presentations?

        If a writer keeps it simple, he/she is pretty certain that the personal feelings expressed will be understood.
        If a writer intentionally introduces complexities into his/her work, then there is a possibility of the reader not understanding or (worse) misunderstanding the dialogue presented.

        A great writer (to me) is one whose work is simple for the casual reader, but invites a deeper exploration of potential meanings from readers who chose that route.

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        • Yeah Colin, I got all you meant ๐Ÿ™‚ and I surely agree ๐Ÿ˜‰ but yes sometimes writing some complex and uncertain things is also good as a change ๐Ÿ˜‰ but yeah, it is also that the writing itself becomes complex, we don’t have to think before and try to make it complex ๐Ÿ˜‰ Love your thoughts man ๐Ÿ™‚

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