I was I
You were you
And things were okay
I met you
You met me
Things were lil different
I came to know you
You came to know me
Things started rolling
I liked you
You were confused
Things got stuck for a while
I hoped that
Things will be fine
You were mute from your side
I kept my fingers crossed
For your reply
And it came
But it was
Not what I expected
Things were all gone
Things were shattered
We could had become
The most precious diamond
Could have crystallized
Into a gem
But these doubts and confusion
And not talking
And being silent
Instead made us coal
Unwanted
Better to forget
And burn away
A lil effort
And we would had been the best gem ever..
Aww, this is so beautiful, Darshith!
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Thank you Gaurav 😀
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You’re welcome!
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A different take on diamond 🙂 I like!
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Thank you Prajakta for your thoughts 🙂 Yes, we all want diamonds but we have to remember that both are important in building our character 😉
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Not every love story have a beautiful ever-after to it but we can make sure that next time when love touches us ,we make diamond out of it rather than coal 🙂
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Wow.. Yes, we should definitely aim for a diamond the next time 🙂 This is a nice thought, which I didn’t think about 😉
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keep working hard 😉
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Amazing!!
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Thank you Ruma 🙂
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Nice one!
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Thanks Roopam for appreciating 😉
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Look at that four piece of coal…!! They are looking at the diamond with the feelings of sorrow.. What happen when you’re on the cusp of achieving something and you failed to do so…!!!??
Nicely written as always Mr. Poet. . 😉
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Wow ! I didn’t go down that road and you just gave a new insight to the image and the poem 😉 Thank you Parin for your superb support 😀
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awwwwwww
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Thank you 🙂
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Well i am speechless. Another beautiful poem ❤️❤️
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You just make my day with your comments, Saloni 🙂 You are a blessing 😉
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Honored to be one
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Coal has more utility than diamond. That broken relationship teaches you more than the other ones. 🙂
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Oh yes, Adi. Both coal and diamond has their uses. Broken relationships do teach us many things. Sometimes, both people feel also for one another but just for the betterment and a hint of confusion, bury their feelings and that also teaches a lot 🙂
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Amazing ! You’ve written a beautiful but heart wrenching poem. 🙂
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Thank you Archita for your insights and feeling the words 🙂 Welcome back 😉
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You’re welcome and it feels great to be back after long time. 🙂
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Same here 🙂 It was great reading your wonderful work also 😉
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Same here too. 😛
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So cool!
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Thank you Nico, my friend 🙂
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