Everybody wants everything
Everybody needs love
Everybody seeks peace
Everybody craves power
Everybody longs for that special one
Everybody desires happiness
Everybody avoids pain
Everybody loves smiles
Everybody deserves care
Everybody looks for beauty
Everybody wants to write their own story
But as each story has many characters
And each one of those
Impacts on the script
Similarly, each one of our known
And sometimes unknown people has a role
In OUR STORY
And shapes the events of it
And hence the ending we think for
OUR STORY doesn’t always take place
Something different
Something Beautiful
Sometimes worst
Also happens
And we have to accept it
Let the ending be written as it happened
We can imagine and write it as a
Brand New ending
Just as we thought it would be
But man, not always it happens
Ad hence let others also
Be a part of OUR STORY
And write their part
In their own hand
And I assure you
They will try to make
YOUR STORY more beautiful
By making their character the Protagonist
And hence the plot becomes
Powerful and twistful
With many MANY
Good characters
And hence the ending
Is more PERFECT than your
Brand New ending..
P.S. : I have been listening to LOST STARS since today morning(in loop) and got Brand New Ending from there ๐
I don’t know what inspires you
But you are good in writing
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Appreciation from you really means a lot & such powerful words make me delighted ๐ Inspiration is a rare yet common thing. We can get inspired from a flower, a bird, a leave, an ant. Trying to stick to positivities of life is important ๐
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Very beautiful and I couldn’t agree more with it! โค
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I am so glad for this ๐ Thanks again ๐
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No worries Darshith! ๐
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And so very soon brand new ending becomes brand old ending, giving a new one again.. Nice read.. ๐
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Exactly! ๐
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Love this! written so beautifully Darshith ๐
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Thank you Rupinder ๐
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Lost stars ๐ Perfection with lovely words
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Yes Prajakta ๐
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So very true.
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Thank you Mel ๐
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WElcome Darsh.
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This is so beautiful!! ๐
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Thank you dear ๐
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My pleasure!! ๐
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A very unique perception ๐ Also, you should correct that ‘Ad’ to and. (Ad Hence) ๐
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Thank you Hasmeet ๐ will correct it in a while ๐ You are such a devout reader ๐
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I know ๐
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Good ๐
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Oh, I loved the “ending”, :P. Anyway, nice one, indeed!
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Thanks Srishti ๐ loving the ending is like the best thing ever. If not, then you can go for a brand new ending ๐
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That’s a very nice poem Drashith. Whatever be the past, one can always work towards a brand new ending.
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Yes Somali ๐ We can always look for a brand new ending, if we are not satisfied with the present one ๐
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Ending matters. . It matters so badly man.. And if it doesn’t, its not an end for sure.. (y)
Brand new ending. . What a view bro..!!
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Yes correct! Thanks Parin for appreciation ๐
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Leonard Cohen is amazing. He has a new album out, by the way. Check out “Rewrite” by Paul Simon too. Very appropriate for your post as well.
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Wow! I am so glad that 1 song can give me so many new songs and I love it ๐ Will listen in a while. Thanks Sonny ๐
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You got it. Enjoy. Great post by the way
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Thank you ๐ Loved “Rewrite”. It really suits the post but it’s way different. I enjoyed the beginning music more ๐
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Quite the guitar player.
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Yes ๐
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nice!
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Thank you Lynn ๐
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welcome
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take my hand let’s see where we wake up tomorrow…am I right? the same Lost Stars..?
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Let’s get drunk all our tears & God.. This is Love โค I don't know why, I am listening to it so many times. Had heard this so long back ๐
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cool…I like it too..
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Yup ๐
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Cool and very philosophical poem. Interesting you mention a song. From the beginning part, I was thinking of Leonard Cohen’s Everybody Knows. Cheers!
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I love Leonard Cohen but hadn’t heard this song ๐ Thanks for sharing and liking the post ๐
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My pleasure. After recommending it, I listened to the song on my drive to work. Cheers
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Great ๐
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Darshith _ I think that you are perhaps reading too much, and not thinking enough. Most of those lines that start “Everybody ……………………” are blatantly wrong and (more importantly) can drastically mislead an impressionable mind. Whereas many people no doubt fit those statements, “everybody” does not. I believe that a poet/writer has a responsibility not to mislead unless it is clearly stated to be a piece of fantasy or product of a delusional mind. ๐
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I think you’re correct. Everybody do not fit into that. Many may deny that or not accept it or due to some reason don’t want to let their inner thoughts open but most would fall in that category but not everybody. I can write ALMOST everybody. More thinking from next time ๐ Thanks Colin for your guidance ๐
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I loved it ๐
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Thanks Dileep ๐
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Don’t mention it! I do really love your blog and manyatimes, I read your posts with a wide opened mouth :p
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Same here :d I also like your posts and glad that we are connected ๐
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It was in the spam folder ๐
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Darshith Badiyani, There! You found it! Now I got to go look for van by the river and let her know that my comments not taking in her site.
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Yeah do that ๐ I wonder that my comments would also be going to other’s spam folder ๐
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OH! Maybe!
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This is so beautiful! I have a quote for you, “When writing the story of your life, don’t let anyone else hold the pen.” ๐
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Thanks Jen! Oh ok ๐ My story, my pen, my words, my ideas ๐ Yes, but taking help of others is allowed, right? ๐
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Of course! ๐ I just meant we should all own our own stories so we can all write our own endings. ๐ We’re all in this together and helping each other is what it’s all about. ๐
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Yes, that’s what I had in my mind also ๐ Our own endings. Brand new endings ๐ Thanks Jen for your thoughts ๐
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Anytime Darshith, so glad you are here
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Music has compelling power ๐ It makes you think in the direction it want ๐ Nice one ๐
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Yeah Neerja ๐ There’s a line CUPID’S DEMANDING BACK HIS ARROW ๐ฆ I am WOWed every time I listen to that line ๐
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You love that line because you our going through that phase of love life ๐
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Yes ๐ You’re a mind reader ๐
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Ha ha ๐
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