Through the peephole..

I don’t want to be outside
Knowing you through a peephole
I want you to open the gates
And let me flood in
Know you wholly
I am done
Living life your way
Knowing the parts of you
You wanted me to see
Now either let me see you wholly
Know you wholly
Let full submission be a part of us
Or cover the peephole
And bid me farewell
Because peephole is
Not letting me live
And not letting me leave
So, help me
And choose something
As I always said to you
You have the reigns & chains
It’s time again for you
To choose from options
And get me or forget me
I am just a closed door away
With the smile you like to see
With the heart you like to love
With the words you like to hear
Hopefully with the love you like to have


P.S. : Today’s song is Outside by Staind. One of my favorite πŸ˜‰

73 thoughts on “Through the peephole..

  1. That’s really a lovely creation Darshith. The para about the peephole and a how it wouldn’t let you leave or live and then the last line made it all the more awesome.
    Also,The song suggestion is great too. I like the music πŸ˜‰

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  2. Darshith, this is indeed good to read.. But I got few thoughts as I differ from your opinions..

    You are the one peeping through the hole and why are you asking the other one to close the peephole?

    If you are not comfortable, with where you are, aren’t you the one who should move on? You could knock the door, but you must also leave, when the knock is unanswered.. To save yourself from further pain..

    Also aren’t you assuming too much from just what you saw through the peephole..

    Now, you can just ignore all above, call it poetic justice and be happy for a beautiful verse.. πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

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    • Wow! Thanks Aadhirai for asking your heart & I think I didn’t make things clear. I have knocked (in real life) but it’s unanswered. And the view from the peephole is so wonderful and enchanting that I can’t go anywhere else. The person inside has to close the peephole or open the door to end both our struggle πŸ˜‰ I know the person inside is also not satisfied with the view she’s having from the same peephole (may be and yeah I used a she :D). But no matter what, if the knock is unanswered then the best thing will be to go to somewhere else. Let’s wait & see what the person inside does πŸ˜‰ May be it’s all a farce and I am looking at a poster used to close the peephole from inside already. Anything is possible. May be no one is inside also. Some serious thoughts can bring so many scenarios in an instant πŸ˜€

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  3. It’s a beautiful read Darsith πŸ™‚

    I have a suggestion: Don’t use more than 15 tags(+categories) for one post. πŸ™‚

    Have a great week ahead.

    Anand πŸ™‚

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