What makes you young?
What makes you wild?
What makes you free?
What makes you yourself?
Is it something external
Which is known
Or something internal
Which is unknown
And you are in search of that
And you don’t know whether
You will find it or not
But it’s always
Worth a try
It’s always
Worth a shot
Gambling for happiness
Risking to be yourself
Because you matter
To yourself
Are you ready
To find who you are?
Get indulged..
P.S.: Tune toΒ Summertime Sadness. Indulged in this songΒ since morning π
Beautiful π Summertime Sadness brought this out? That’s great!
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Summertime Sadness was the song which I listened to that day. For like hours π I guess that it brought those words π Thanks Prajakta π
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WOW !! I loved the beautiful lines :
Is it something external
Which is known
Or something internal
Which is unknown
Somehow, for me it is an intrinsic motivation π Loved the way you put it forth !
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Thank you Himali π I loved those lines while writing π Motivation, no matter from where, means a lot. Glad you could relate π
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Thanks for sharing π I love your positivism !
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Me too! Thank you for all the appreciation π
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You have amazing insight. Keep writing! Music is what keeps me young and wild! π It’s an external influence that keeps my internal fire burning. I can’t live without it, love the song you chose too. π
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External influence & internal fire burning sounded so peaceful to read & I know that feeling dear π Thanks Jen π
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Anytime π
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You are so spiritual and understanding of life and spreading same things
That is good part
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Thank you again boss π
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I’m ready to find myself. Nothing as happy as find myself π Good job!
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Thanks Khloe π Yeah, finding ourselves is the best thing EVER!
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You’re welcome π π π
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great piece… well penned… π
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Thanks Ashish π
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I’m ready! Let it roll.
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That’s the spirit friend π
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Really nice. Individuality is beautiful
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Thanks π Glad you can relate.
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I guess and hope a proper combination of in and out.. nice one! π
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Wow! You have great things and wanting proper combo is the best π
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Very well written Darshith bro.. We should give it a try.. We don’t the destination, but if we give a try doing the things which we love, then we will land in the right path.. π
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Jackie, my man, you always understand words so beautifully π We all will definitely reach the right destination π
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Haha.. It’s the way you write bro.. Thank you bro…. And yes, for sure… We all will reach our destinations..
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Yes, we will π Thank you for your kind words π
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It’s my pleasure bro.. π
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Have to listen to that song now! Nice poem π
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The song’s awesome π Thanks brother!
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Ah! Summertime sadness β€ Used to love that song. Haven’t listened to it for quite some while now π Good poem ππ
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Yeah, I was also detached to music for sometime but back again & loving everything about it π Thanks Hasmeet π
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Beautiful, Free spirit is you.
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Thanks! We all are young, wild & free. Need to realize & accept & March towards it π
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You seem to be on a spree of spinning poetry from music.. π
Whatever motivates you, the result is lovely.. π
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This poem was written from the image π I just mentioned the song as I was listening to it the whole day today π but yeah, whatever motivates, result matters, sometimes π
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Oh.. I assumed that from the PS.. π Anyway all is well, that ends well.. π
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Yes π P.S. are just to add something at the end for you all people about my day π
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Cool.. Point noted.. π
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Lovely. π
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Thank you π I still don’t know your name Ms. BookThief π
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Haha, it’s Rupali. π
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Gotcha π Thank you!
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