If another guy
Loves the Gurl
I love
Shall I fight with him?
Shall I try to beat the hell out of him?
Why should I?
How can I?
I know doing that
Will make the Gurl
Like me more
Love me more
But I also have to
See the fact
That the Gurl
Is so awesome
So wonderful
That guys can’t stop themselves
From falling for her
And I can’t blame them
But that doesn’t mean
All like and love her
There may be lust
Or other devilish things
In their minds also
But to make the Gurl
Like and love me
I have to increase my love
For her
Many times a fold
That can’t be done
By controlling others
Sorry, I can’t
But I can’t blame any
I don’t own the Gurl
And the Gurl is simply
Awesome
I am not able to make sense also
Of what I am writing
So let me STOP
Writing only
Because falling forΒ her
Was not in my control..
Ohmg! Lover boy. π Every word written here made complete sense. π
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Archita, you definitely made me happy π This poem was written just this week and yet it seems so very far in the past π Love, really is, ingrained within our soul π
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I’m glad I did that. π That is completely true, love won’t let us run far away from itself. π
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Sadly, but yes ! π
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Totally agree with you! Falling in love is uncontrollable and easy but you know what they say is really tough..Staying in love π So the complications does not end here yaaar!!
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Yes that;s true π It’s just not that if we are able to make ourselves understand then it will survive. No, we also gotta make the other half understand things and it consumes energy and it’s worth it for that special someone. Falling part is bubbly but yeah, staying bubbly is difficult π Thank you for your thoughts π
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OK I assume after reading all the comments, Man to Man comment I can give. Before that – Whatever happens do what from the gut inside that sound says you cos in the end whatever happens + or -, you will be who you are and be happy about it. You see f***ing quantums, difficult to summarize all possibilities within few statements.
Here it is :
Step A : I f***ing love u. I just love u. F***ing is just to show the exaggeration.
Step A: Rated U : You are the girl with whom I want to eat an ice cream. i.e. I love you.
Step A : Clear your head. Forget what pisses you. Read my blog on killing bitterness. Now go tell what truly deeply inside you feel. Very very calmly and nicely. If you already done that go to step B.
Step B: Would you f***ing care to answer my feelings. F***ing is just an expression to show my eagerness. Would you ? I mean what exactly you got to say !
Step B : Rated U : You want to eat ice cream with me ?
Step B : Just wait wait
.
.
.
.not yet
Wait
Wait until what she has got to tell.
You did your job by telling.
You got it ? You have done your job!
Now she will tell you.
Possibilities – You see f***ing quantums. For the better of it, once you have told and before she replies, you should stop thinking and just eat your icecream π
She : Yes. Happy Kissing
She : No. Asta la vista. This ain’t gonna work.
She : May be. Let’s stay in touch and she what happens.
She : I don’t know. Boy you are so much in trrrrrouble.
Well. Stop. Done. Long comment. π¦
If you managed to read till here then here it is Physicists in me says – Breath and Smile. You are doing great bro π
Just continue. Never stop loving. Never stop being YOU. π Tada !
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Man, I gotta be hell of a lucky person to receive such a great generous comment from you or you may be hell of a helpful person π Read it through and got you Killing Bitterness post also π Will read that π Yeah, I could get parts of your comment and was able to make sense π Can try to implement some of it and see what happens π Trying times π But, you’re awesome and loved the Man to Man comment π and How you put up your point of view in for of Saloni’s comment also π
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Pleasure.
Best place to be at in recent times, I discovered is WP. You guys out there are awesome. Thoughts just come out naturally π
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Same feeling π I am spending quite a lot time here, at least on the weekends π
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I am happy there way no mention of “friend-zone”! Nice work π
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Thank you Prajakta π Yes, there was no mention of that but I think that’s the present situation π hopefully it will change soon.
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Hey the more the competition, the worthy the selection…
I hope you get lots of competition, coz that girl is so awesome..
I wish you get selected of all, coz you are her destiny..
Being the chosen one,
from the lot of zero
doesn’t make you a hero.. π
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Wow ! Thanks Aadhirai for your awesome comment and support π Yes being chosen and being the one and being the hero is important but secondary. Whether the Gurl also feels the same or not I don’t know and to know that she has to open up which she ain’t doing π so will see what other thing can be done π The journey so far hasn’t been a smooth one and the coming path is also not smooth but I guess that we will survive somehow: D
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Hard earned prize tastes better than easily achieved ones..
As long as you don’t give up, you are on the right path.. π
Wishes for the best.. π
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Yes, that’s absolutely the thing π Hard earned prize.. Will keep that in mind π You are wonderful π
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Thanks!!
Keep up the spirit and keep smiling.. π
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Thank you Aadhirai π You too π
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Aah! Wish it was that easy in love to control someone’s actions but dang the reality is that it’s not possible no matter how hard we try! Love is a complicated feeling!
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Yes Shweta, it is not π¦ But we always gotta see the positive things and its good that we felt that feeling of love and helplessness which will make us stronger for the future π There is never all loss π
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That’s the spirit Darshith π
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Thank you so much Shweta π
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“Falling in love with her was not in my control” & “Can I control her to not fall in love with other???”..
And if it happens than who’s fault is that. ? ?
Interesting. . Isn’t it? ?
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Nice loop you see π and I am not concerned about the fault and whose it is π and I know it’s not mandatory that a Gurl will feel the same for me as I feel for her. But its just that I wish she could see and feel and TRY to connect with me π if it’s a failure then we can stop π
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Agreed. . (y)
You know what love doesn’t make sense. . We can’t logic our way into or out of it.. It just happens. . π
So yes, agreed with you on that. .
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Yes Parin π Wish this and wish that is all we can wish in the case if love π Thanks man for your support π
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Always agree with you in these stuffs. . π π
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Kyu re? Hum koi love guru nahi hai π gyan chahiye π
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Hahaha…
Not love guru. . π
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Chalo acha hai π
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That is something which happens quite often. The guy must however behave intelligently. Looks like you know how to behave π
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Intelligence doesn’t work here π I am failing I think π behaving I know but some wrong thinking and you are out of her life for good. Thanks Maryam for your advice π
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Oh come on. You look a little nervous. Buck up dude! Just be yourself.
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Can’t stop laughing π but yeah thanks for the support Maryam π You really made me happy with your BUCK UP DUDE! π
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My pleasure π
Anytime π
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Indeed love cannot be controlled, ut as Saloni said, if she truyl loves he will be yours, come what may π
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Yes π fingers crossed for now. I am glad that the path of the guy and the Gurl crossed π
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Good to know! π
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Falling in love is indeed, uncontrollable </3
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Yes Nicole π Let the uncontrollable control us then π
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One should not fear if other boys fall for her because if that girl loves truly no matter what happens she is never going to leave you. But yes you expressed the thoughts of a guy well π
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Yes Saloni that is true π but the guy don’t know what the Gurl feels and hence the ambiguity π Guys are always confused.. I am always π
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Well gurls are complicated beings but if you try are able to understand them they are the most simple beings
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Now what does that mean? π yeah I tried and no improvement π it’s just like a scratch card with the same thing written TRY AGAIN π I am kidding here π
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Well you better be kidding! I am telling you if you get to understand girls you will know the simplicity in her
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Aye aye captain ! Roger that π On a serious note, I find girls simple yes but just somehow things get messed up and its not a boy-girl problem.. It’s a brain-brain problem π
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Hahahah true π. This brain problem does creates a lot of problems
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Haan π let’s see what happens π
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Thank you for your help and guidance and support π You are the best π
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Thanks !!!
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Totally brain-brain problem!
You are almost there man!
Why not just breath and tell what’s in your head.
You see wondering why things are the way they are is not going to help much, sometimes it is just letting your heart out completely makes wonders take a u turn into your life !
*Well again, it is no newtons law, it is more of like quantum physics, every girl behaves completely different :D, however they are all still the same.
I would roger Saloni here !
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Yes Bhanu, I totally agree to that π The best possible solution of almost every problem is to vent and let the other person know about how you feel and then accept whatever the reaction π But the thing is, I know the reaction and I know, it’s not in my favor π And still, I am ready to hold on and see if some new door opens up π Let’s see but yeah you’re a life saver π
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Not guys, girls. They never tell you and you are left to be amazed ! If you don’t have strong hold of yourself and you are a puzzle solver, then God Bless You, hope you find peace π
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All are confused. Guys a bit less π Yes, we have to be strong,no doubt, to cross the ocean of confusion π
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